Wednesday, August 06, 2014

The great fish of Maui

The Great fish of Maui
Maui is a character in a book called Maui and the sun. It is about the sun. He is also in this story and did you know that the north island is a fish!
 

One day there was a man on a island. This is Maui. Maui punched has nose and got some blood to put it on the hook. He threw it in the deep deep water. Suddenly he felt something stuck on the hook, so he got his men and told them that something was stuck on the hook so they pulled and heaved but it did not work so they did it again and they pulled and heaved and it burst  it up  in the air and the great fish smashed on the boat. After they got the fish Maui went and dived into the water and did a karakia to the god of the sea. The fish is North Island and the men made the hills, river, sea, and that was all. When Maui got back up on the boat they went far far far away.   

2 comments:

  1. Wow Traylan great work

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  2. I know how hard you worked to get this piece of writing finished Traylan and it shows. You took on all the feedback I gave you and produced some great work. Well done! Miss Eglinton.

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